What makes someone have a “childish writing style”?

[Clavicus Vile]

I was posted on IT earlier, I didn’t really care about most of what they had to say as they have they don’t have a clear understanding of what it truly means to be an incel. But one person did say I have a childish writing style. I’m just curious, do I write childishly? I feel like I write clearly enough for people to understand what I’m saying. I mean sure I’m no Englishmen or philosopher and don’t have the most advanced vocabulary but I don’t get what makes it childish. I mean sometimes I miss some words because my devices are old and glitchy and I type fast.

 

[InceldianWarrior]

Can you write this again in a more mature style please

 

[TuxedoMask]

Someone on Reddit once said I was an Indian cause of my writing style. Redditors think you need to be writing in Old English to be considered smart.

 

[Biowaste Removal]

Someone on Reddit once said I was an Indian cause of my writing style. Redditors think you need to be writing in Old English to be considered smart.

Just coomed to your avi

 

[TuxedoMask]

Just coomed to your avi

Good to know

 

[Puer aeternus]

Someone on Reddit once said I was an Indian cause of my writing style. Redditors think you need to be writing in Old English to be considered smart.

Prithee be careful, the 'igh lords be ever so weary, the chasm that is their skulls, forever rattling,

 

[TuxedoMask]

Prithee be careful, the 'igh lords be ever so weary, the chasm that is their skulls, forever rattling,

 

[InceldianWarrior]

you sound fine imo

 

[coolguy87]

Any time I see "xD" you know they're a child.

 

[slavcel11]

from your posts you seem not older than 18 yo tbh, not to age shame or anything

 

[Clavicus Vile]

from your posts you seem not older than 18 yo tbh, not to age shame or anything

What would make me seem older?

 

[slavcel11]

What would make me seem older?

i don't know dude, i cant put my finger on it, the way you structure your sentences just gives away someone who isn't experienced, i wish i could say something more meaningful

 

[Clavicus Vile]

i don't know dude, i cant put my finger on it, the way you structure your sentences just gives away someone who isn't experienced, i wish i could say something more meaningful

Nah it’s all good bro, if anything it only further proves why I belong here lmao.

 

[Zhou Chang-Xing]

I was posted on IT earlier, I didn’t really care about most of what they had to say as they have they don’t have a clear understanding of what it truly means to be an incel. But one person did say I have a childish writing style. I’m just curious, do I write childishly? I feel like I write clearly enough for people to understand what I’m saying. I mean sure I’m no Englishmen or philosopher and don’t have the most advanced vocabulary but I don’t get what makes it childish. I mean sometimes I miss some words because my devices are old and glitchy and I type fast.

People use the accusation of immaturity whenever they lack any other criticism. Just ignore them and try to emulate the writing styles of people who are held in higher regard.