A poem on suicidal tendencies and getting into another dimension.

[ragequiter]

Dimensions

I don’t think I would see the sun tomorrow.
As I sit here in misery,
And flow in deceit.
I fade away from this nothingness,
They look at me and laughed.
And I become crazier.

[UWSL]Tear the child and cut it the way you like to cut.[/UWSL]
Burns year after year of burns.
The killer in me is the killer in you,
When it takes over my head nothing seems impossible.
But life got hard, I need to change.
And when I cannot COPE with life I will ROPE it.

I have taken some inspiration from Layne Staley of AiC

 

[TheProphetMuscle]

You should become a songwriter

 

[ThoughtfulCel]

This is literally what no pussy does to men, but sex isn't a need, right?

 

[ragequiter]

This is literally what no pussy does to men, but sex isn't a need, right?

It is not my need but my right as a human.

 

[ragequiter]

You should become a songwriter

But no fuckhole likes my poems they say my poems are cringe.

 

[Doctor Eggman]

Dimensions

I don’t think I would see the sun tomorrow.
As I sit here in misery,
And flow in deceit.
I fade away from this nothingness,
They look at me and laughed.
And I become crazier.

[UWSL]Tear the child and cut it the way you like to cut.[/UWSL]
Burns year after year of burns.
The killer in me is the killer in you,
When it takes over my head nothing seems impossible.
But life got hard, I need to change.
And when I cannot COPE with life I will ROPE it.

I have taken some inspiration from Layne Staley of AiC

Here, I made it rhyme. I liked it, and thought rhyming would make it even better

I thought not of seeing the sun tomorrow,
as I sat wallowing in my sorrow,
Reeking from deceit and lies
From the world, I cut off my ties
They laughed at me, not knowing my pain
And I slowly started to become insane

Cut it the way you like to cut
Year after year, the burns erupt
The killer inside our heads is same
All is possible when it calls my name
But life grew hard, I remained invariable
And I will end it all, when the pain gets unbearable

 

[ragequiter]

Here, I made it rhyme. I liked it, and thought rhyming would make it even better

I thought not of seeing the sun tomorrow,
as I sat wallowing in my sorrow,
Reeking from deceit and lies
From the world, I cut off my ties
They laughed at me, not knowing my pain
And I slowly started to become insane

Cut it the way you like to cut
Year after year, the burns erupt
The killer inside our heads is same
All is possible when it calls my name
But life grew hard, I remained invariable
And I will end it all, when the pain gets unbearable

Nice man. but I don’t rhyme because it becomes but my ain’t smooth so why to rhyme. I appreciated your effort

 

[Doctor Eggman]

Nice man. but I don’t rhyme because it becomes but my ain’t smooth so why to rhyme. I appreciated your effort

No problem! I just do this for fun because I like writing

 

[ragequiter]

No problem! I just do this for fun because I like writing

I write only when my feelings gets so low I cannot bear it anymore. Nice to meet you brocel.

 

[Doctor Eggman]

I write only when my feelings gets so low I cannot bear it anymore. Nice to meet you brocel.

Nice to meet you too!

 

[nystagmuscel]

Someone should make a poetry mega thread tbh

 

[ragequiter]

Someone should make a poetry mega thread tbh

 

[BornToLose]

The killer in me is the killer in you

SmashingPumpkinsmaxxing?

 

[ragequiter]

SmashingPumpkinsmaxxing?

yeah yeah i took inspiration

 

[BornToLose]

yeah yeah i took inspiration

Inspiration, plagiarism. Whatever. Good taste though.

 

[ragequiter]

Inspiration, plagiarism. Whatever. Good taste though.

thanks

 

[Emba]

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